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Untouchable Dreams

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LadyMeru
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I want you to see my dreams but they are invisible,


I want you to feel my dreams but they are untouchable,


I want you to hear my dreams but they make no sounds,


I want to bring you my dreams but they can not be contained,


I want to translate my dreams but they are in a secret language,


I want to write my dreams but they are impossible too describe,


I want to draw my dreams but the images escape me,


I want to mold my dreams but they take no shape,


I want to compose my dreams but the music sounds strange,


I want to share my dreams but I can't find out how.
I have so many dreams but they're so hard to convey. Just gotta keep practicing.

This is a little thing I wrote a while ago. Found it buried amongst boring half baked school essays while putting all my literature in folders.

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Can you relate to this?
Do you feel any emotion reading it? Hopelessness perhaps?
Should I have left the stanzas touching or were the spaces good?
Was it over all a nice poem?
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It was overall a very good poem! All the descriptions of what you want to do with the dreams, but can't is really unique. Not sure if I can relate to it exactly, but I believe I know what you're talking about. As for the stanzas, perhaps this way is better. Makes it nice and easy on the eyes to read.